Hey Luis, this one is looking good, Its a nice composition and quite Poetic. I think there could be a few things you could do to make it stand out more. Like, increasing the values, creating darker areas to contrast the bright white dress, as the floor takes a lot of the focus. Also considering a Foreground and maybe even some leaves blowing of that tree. I like the style, and I like the contrast of her hair against the blue sky.
Thanks Dan. I think I used up the lighter values range to early. I've tried later to bring everything else down a bit but I didn't like how it was looking. But yes, the result was this lack of contrast. I agree that I should have worked on more subtle details in the different elements of the composition. Thanks for your feedback.
Hey Luis, this one is looking good, Its a nice composition and quite Poetic. I think there could be a few things you could do to make it stand out more. Like, increasing the values, creating darker areas to contrast the bright white dress, as the floor takes a lot of the focus. Also considering a Foreground and maybe even some leaves blowing of that tree. I like the style, and I like the contrast of her hair against the blue sky.
ReplyDeleteThanks Dan. I think I used up the lighter values range to early. I've tried later to bring everything else down a bit but I didn't like how it was looking. But yes, the result was this lack of contrast. I agree that I should have worked on more subtle details in the different elements of the composition.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your feedback.