...e quando finalmente todos se sentaram rodeando a fogueira, na sombra da carapaça da velha Celeste, constelações de histórias esperavam a sua vez.
Hey, thats a nice little concept, nice loose style, good lighting... I think that maybe the eyes could be pushed back, as though whatever is under the bed is sitting a bit further back, glowing in the distance, i think it would add more to the image.... and also maybe slightly shift the eyes to look towards the kid. But well thats just my thoughts,; Good work luis!.
Hey Hey Daniel!! thanks for your thoughts. now that you say it, I couldn't agree more. the eyes are off. they re not looking towards the kid and they don t look like they re under the bed :S I wish I had see something so obvious before you pointed out :S oh well, next time maybe. I'm glad you like the style though. Thanks for the comment and the critique. Do drop by whenever :)